The slow stream is choked

With the litter of the past

Ripples and eddies


My love is diffuse

Trickling through the branches

While you seek brilliance


© M. G. Iannucci 2016


“The heart is as truly there where its love is as it is in the physical body to which it gives life.” The Cloud of Unknowing

8 thoughts on “Luce

      1. In a previous job after I left the classroom, I did a lot of word-smithing for a publishing company. I had to reword and rephrase passages that were too long so they fit into smaller totals and still retained their meaning. That sentence would not survive intact.

        I actually enjoyed the task. It felt very good taking a 250 word passage and smithing it into 100.


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